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Dear Ms. Brown:

I am very pleased to inform you that you have been admitted to the two-year Master of Public Policy (MPP) program at the Irving B. Harris Graduate School of Public Policy Studies at the University of Chicago. The Committee on Admission and Aid accepted your application based on outstanding academic achievement, professional commitment, and personal motivation. Our decision reflects confidence in your continuing promise as a student and policy professional. In turn, we are certain that you will contribute greatly to the intellectual vitality of the program and to our larger community of alumni and friends, all of whom are dedicated to advance the public good.

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